The last walk across the beach they took
Before parting for a long, long time;
In the blue and white of moon and night,
Neither of them wanted to unclasp hands
But they had to, as time was running out.
A fleeting glance, that took in all
While moving on each one's way,
Remained etched in their hearts.
It was the nectar they would thrive on
Till they met again.
13 comments:
wow.. thats really great.. the lines speak for the parting souls.. liked it ayesha..
Hiii Ayesha -----Let me know if they met again.....Nice.
Grey
Hi Shravan!
Thanks for your appreciation.
Best wishes :)
Hi Grey!
Thanks a lot. God is kind...they have met again :D
Best wishes :)
Very very romantic and a perfect setting by the beach.:-)
Nice poem!!! The pain of separation and the hope of meeting up again... beautifully expressed
Hi Swetha!
Thanks a lot for your appreciative comment. Best wishes :)
Hi "Mad Blogger"!
How beautifully you have depicted the emotional action of the poem, in your comment.
Thank you very much for your appreciation. Do come again. Best wishes :)
Ayesha
beautiful ayesha... You are doing a great job at blogger!!! trust me!!
:) take care!!!
Beautiful Ayesha!Really liked wt youve posted :)
Hi 'My World' and Sana!
Thanks a lot for your appreciative comments. Best wihes :)
Ayesha
Wow! Poetically romantic..!
Thanks Ramesh :)
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