Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Absorption



The last walk across the beach they took

Before parting for a long, long time;

In the blue and white of moon and night,

Neither of them wanted to unclasp hands

But they had to, as time was running out.

A fleeting glance, that took in all

While moving on each one's way,

Remained etched in their hearts.

It was the nectar they would thrive on

Till they met again.

13 comments:

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

wow.. thats really great.. the lines speak for the parting souls.. liked it ayesha..

GreyPilgrim said...

Hiii Ayesha -----Let me know if they met again.....Nice.

Grey

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Shravan!

Thanks for your appreciation.

Best wishes :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Grey!

Thanks a lot. God is kind...they have met again :D

Best wishes :)

Whirlwind said...

Very very romantic and a perfect setting by the beach.:-)

Mad Blogger said...

Nice poem!!! The pain of separation and the hope of meeting up again... beautifully expressed

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Swetha!

Thanks a lot for your appreciative comment. Best wishes :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi "Mad Blogger"!

How beautifully you have depicted the emotional action of the poem, in your comment.

Thank you very much for your appreciation. Do come again. Best wishes :)

Ayesha

My World... said...

beautiful ayesha... You are doing a great job at blogger!!! trust me!!
:) take care!!!

A New Beginning said...

Beautiful Ayesha!Really liked wt youve posted :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi 'My World' and Sana!

Thanks a lot for your appreciative comments. Best wihes :)

Ayesha

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

Wow! Poetically romantic..!

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thanks Ramesh :)