Tuesday, July 21, 2009

She sees her Destiny


Closing her eyes, tired after yet another day
Full of struggles and despair,
She falls asleep, not keen to wake up again.
But, tonight is different for her;
Tonight is destiny, for all her pain is washed away,
As, towards dawn, she sees in her dream,
Talking to her like never before,
Her cherished Fate.
Her dream is reality, greater than all else.

14 comments:

KParthasarathi said...

Blessed are those who get such dreams.It is said God often talks to those whom He holds dear through dreams.

My World... said...

Thats a beautiful feeling you have expressed here in your beautiful words!
I wish I could go to sleep that way too!!!
Hope you are having a great day.
:) take care...

A New Beginning said...

Nice post Ayesha:) Take care!

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

adn call it death? or is it just what i feel? and i like these 8-10 lines you post ayesha.. they make me think !:D

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Parthasarathi!

Thanks a lot for your beautiful comment. Best wishes :)

Hi 'My World'

Thanks a lot for your appreciative comment. Best wishes :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Sana!
Thanks for your encouragement.

Hi Shravan!

Thanks a lot for your appreciation. This poem is on a life-altering dream.
Best wishes :)

Ayesha

Whirlwind said...

Really amazing one Ayesha!!

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thanks, Swetha :)

Tukang komen said...

Moments on Pictures:
what a wonderful poem, I like the words.

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Tukang!

Thank you very much for visiting my blog and for your appreciative comment. Do come again.

Best wishes :)

Ayesha

manivannan said...

Lovely poem Ayesha! Well expressed.

Take care ;-)

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

Ah! I understood this poem only after reading so many times. Very beautiful..! Very true too..!

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Ramesh!

Thanks a lot for reading it a number of times. For obvious reasons, the theme could not be conveyed explicitely in the poem.

Best wishes :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Mani!

Thanks a lot :)