Walking with you, every day, side by side,
I thought you were my very own;
Your words said the same thing and I was healed
By your warmth and affection.
As we talked, every day, our souls touched;
I said to you what I have not told others
And you declared I added joy to your life.
The peace in my heart was a gift from you.
Never once did I feel that this could end,
As all good things are made eternal;
You had started the story and gave me hope
Of joy and of tenderness.
The sudden snatching away of your hand,
The unspoken breaking away from me
Has left me stabbed, my heart lacerated
As all alone I stand, once again.
Alone I was, and alone I am today;
You going away has stayed in me;
My guiding star, my healing balm,
After you, I dare not love again.
18 comments:
i guess i know the meaning of the lines ayesha. touching it is. very touching. loved the lines.
Thanks Shravan, for appreciating and for understanding.
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hey ayesha,
touching poem as shravan told...
love come and go...it is upto you to choose which one to take it for granted....hmm....God bless you yaar...take care...
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Best wishes :)
Wow. This is such a touching poem Ayesha. Beautifully portrayed!!
@ Swetha,
Thanks a lot for always encouraging me :)
@pkv
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Yet another master piece:) All the very best Ayesha,its a beautiful post indeed!
@ Sana,
Thank you for appreciating my work so much. Have a nice day, Sana.
@ Swapna,
Thank you very much for following my blog :)I hope you will also write some comments, if you like my work. Have a nice day, Swapna.
Yeah...deeply touching lines!
Beautifully expressed... Loved it!
Have a cheerful day ahead
Thanks Manivannan. You too have a nice day :)
It hurts just too much to even comment on dose heartbreaking n heartfelt lines ayesha (sniff...)
loved it anyways (sniff sniff)
2 good .
@ Jinju
Thanks :)
@ Ather
Thank you Ather for liking my work and for following my blog.
Best wishes :)
Ayesha
Wow simple and gloriuos way of arranging words. Lovely poem.
Thank you Kitchen Flavours, for visiting my blog and leaving an appreciative comment. Best wishes.
Like others, I also believe the poem is very touching. I have a feeling I know what this about.
Love can be painful. Who said it wasn't? But it's up to you to give it a chance. You never know when it could happen. When it does, it just happens.
That sounded similar to what I felt in my thoughts ages back and it still lingers. Wonderfully written.
Regards
Grey
@ Shreya,
Thank you a lot for appreciating my work.
@ Grey Pilgrim,
Hi! Thank you very much for visiting my blog and for identifying with what I have expressed. Please visit again.
Best wishes,
Ayesha
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