Friday, February 20, 2009

Never again, my vanished friend


Walking with you, every day, side by side,
I thought you were my very own;
Your words said the same thing and I was healed
By your warmth and affection.

As we talked, every day, our souls touched;
I said to you what I have not told others
And you declared I added joy to your life.

The peace in my heart was a gift from you.

Never once did I feel that this could end,
As all good things are made eternal;
You had started the story and gave me hope
Of joy and of tenderness.

The sudden snatching away of your hand,
The unspoken breaking away from me
Has left me stabbed, my heart lacerated
As all alone I stand, once again.

Alone I was, and alone I am today;
You going away has stayed in me;
My guiding star, my healing balm,
After you, I dare not love again.

18 comments:

Shravan said...

i guess i know the meaning of the lines ayesha. touching it is. very touching. loved the lines.

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thanks Shravan, for appreciating and for understanding.

I tried to post a comment for your poem; it was not possible; so, I have sent the comment in a mail to you. Please copy and paste it at your blog. Best wishes.

My wOrLd... said...

hey ayesha,
touching poem as shravan told...
love come and go...it is upto you to choose which one to take it for granted....hmm....God bless you yaar...take care...

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thanks "My World" for your comment and also for following my blog.

Best wishes :)

Whirlwind said...

Wow. This is such a touching poem Ayesha. Beautifully portrayed!!

Ayesha Parveen said...

@ Swetha,

Thanks a lot for always encouraging me :)

@pkv

Thank you very much for following my blog. I hope, if you like my work, you will leave some comments as well. Best wishes.

A New Beginning said...

Yet another master piece:) All the very best Ayesha,its a beautiful post indeed!

Ayesha Parveen said...

@ Sana,

Thank you for appreciating my work so much. Have a nice day, Sana.

@ Swapna,

Thank you very much for following my blog :)I hope you will also write some comments, if you like my work. Have a nice day, Swapna.

manivannan said...

Yeah...deeply touching lines!

Beautifully expressed... Loved it!

Have a cheerful day ahead

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thanks Manivannan. You too have a nice day :)

Jinju said...

It hurts just too much to even comment on dose heartbreaking n heartfelt lines ayesha (sniff...)

loved it anyways (sniff sniff)

ATHER FAROOQ MANIYAR said...

2 good .

Ayesha Parveen said...

@ Jinju
Thanks :)

@ Ather

Thank you Ather for liking my work and for following my blog.

Best wishes :)

Ayesha

Kitchen Flavours said...

Wow simple and gloriuos way of arranging words. Lovely poem.

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thank you Kitchen Flavours, for visiting my blog and leaving an appreciative comment. Best wishes.

Shreya said...

Like others, I also believe the poem is very touching. I have a feeling I know what this about.
Love can be painful. Who said it wasn't? But it's up to you to give it a chance. You never know when it could happen. When it does, it just happens.

GreyPilgrim said...

That sounded similar to what I felt in my thoughts ages back and it still lingers. Wonderfully written.

Regards
Grey

Ayesha Parveen said...

@ Shreya,
Thank you a lot for appreciating my work.

@ Grey Pilgrim,

Hi! Thank you very much for visiting my blog and for identifying with what I have expressed. Please visit again.

Best wishes,
Ayesha