All the boulders near the river,
Cannot stop it from gushing forth;
How is it possible for the world
To stop love from being love?
The risk of being hurt on the rocks
Hinders not the one who ventures
On the mighty river full of foam:
The call is clear and he responds.
The river and the rocks together
Tell the story of love perennial;
What happens is bound to happen:
True love gives life to the soul.
15 comments:
Wow.Your thoughts were just like the flowing river. Good one Ayesha.:-)
A nice metaphor employed for conveying the path of love in your inimitable style
Excellent poem Ayesha! I loved it :)
Keep them coming!
Cheers!
Very well said:
..'The river and the rocks together
Tell the story of love perennial;..'
Thanks for sharing a lovely poem.
God bless.
beautiful........
Hi Swetha,
Thanks a lot for your nice comment.
Hi Manivannan,
Thanks for you appreciation.
Hi Parthasarathi,
Thanks for your appreciative comment.
Hi Aparna,
Thanks.
Best wishes to all :)
Ayesha
Hi Surjit,
Thank you for your visit and for the nice comment. Do come again.
Ayesha
Blessings...just visiting from Deepu's blog.
Very prolific, love the photograph.
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Hi Rhapsody,
Thank you for visiting my blog and for leaving your appreciative comment.
I too love the photograph...it was taken by a dear friend.
Do come again.
Ayesha
ohhh thats a loving a thought clear as crystal running through the medows of joy!
short and sweet as ever, love-filled as well
true love gives life to the soul..very true. The words have been beautifull brought together to make a wonderful poem:)as always!
Hi Deepu,
That's an eloquent way of showing appreciation for the poem!
Thanks a lot:)
Hi Sana,
Thanks a lot for your nice comment.
Best wishes :)
and just like the river
your words fled.
sank i in them, and
know i not, what to say :)
WOW, Shravan! Your comment is a piece of poetry! Thanks a lot.
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