Thursday, May 7, 2009

A breath of fresh air


"The unnamed relationship in my life
Caught me unawares and I found out
How hollow the life I was leading;
She came, but had no place in my world.

Yet I could not shut her out,
Not turn a deaf ear to her words
Spoken and unuttered as well,
Nor be blind to her joy in me.

In my set life with all its success,
I was choking, dying in my soul;
Her unstated love, her quiet surrender,
Is a breath of fresh air; and I let her be in me. "


(The words are of my choice but the experience is of a dear friend.)

11 comments:

KParthasarathi said...

Beautifully expressed.I know of one such case

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thank you, Parthasarathi, for your appreciative comment.

Best wishes :)

manivannan said...

Simply beautiful :)

Cheers!

A New Beginning said...

Its beautiful how you've filled life in someone elses experience:)
Hats off and take care!

Ayesha Parveen said...

@ Sana,

Thanks Sana for the appreciation.

@ Manivannan,

Thanks a lot :)

Whirlwind said...

Very intense and makes on really introspect!!

AJai said...

Hard to believe that those were not your own thoughts! Wowo. Great work. Keep em comin!

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Swetha,

Thanks for the nice comment.

Best wishes :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Ajai,

Thank you for the visit and for your appreciative comment.

Do come again.

Best wishes :)

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

:) WELL SAID.. AND I KNOW ONE SUCH CASE AS WELL :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Shravan,

Thanks a lot for you encouraging comment.

Have a nice day :)