"The unnamed relationship in my life
Caught me unawares and I found out
How hollow the life I was leading;
She came, but had no place in my world.
Yet I could not shut her out,
Not turn a deaf ear to her words
Spoken and unuttered as well,
Nor be blind to her joy in me.
In my set life with all its success,
I was choking, dying in my soul;
Her unstated love, her quiet surrender,
Is a breath of fresh air; and I let her be in me. "
(The words are of my choice but the experience is of a dear friend.)
11 comments:
Beautifully expressed.I know of one such case
Thank you, Parthasarathi, for your appreciative comment.
Best wishes :)
Simply beautiful :)
Cheers!
Its beautiful how you've filled life in someone elses experience:)
Hats off and take care!
@ Sana,
Thanks Sana for the appreciation.
@ Manivannan,
Thanks a lot :)
Very intense and makes on really introspect!!
Hard to believe that those were not your own thoughts! Wowo. Great work. Keep em comin!
Hi Swetha,
Thanks for the nice comment.
Best wishes :)
Hi Ajai,
Thank you for the visit and for your appreciative comment.
Do come again.
Best wishes :)
:) WELL SAID.. AND I KNOW ONE SUCH CASE AS WELL :)
Hi Shravan,
Thanks a lot for you encouraging comment.
Have a nice day :)
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