Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Closeness: an act of love

As I walk down the narrow lane
Trying to save myself from all the crowd,
Smell and touches undesired,
I feel a breath on my neck.
Yet, for the first time in the narrow lane,
Did I like to have someone so near me.
There is that one whose closeness
Makes me survive anything, anywhere;
Yes, survive even in the narrow lane.
(Dedicated to the one who makes my life worth living)

9 comments:

Whirlwind said...

Very beautiful!!

Isha Shiri said...

Hello!
You spend good messages in your posts. I liked a lot!

I wish peace and happiness for you,
Adelle

A New Beginning said...

Beautiful thoughts poured into a nice poem :)

Issam said...

I am sure it would fell so great to have some1 special always close to use, helping us survive all the troubles of life...

paramveer said...

so closeness!!...a must have..:) :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Thanks, Swetha, Sana, Issam and Paramveer.

Best wishes :)

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Adelle,

Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and for the appreciative comment.

Do come again. Best wishes :)

Ayesha

Susan Deborah said...

Lovely.

Joy always,
Susan

Ayesha Parveen said...

Hi Susan :)

Thank you very much for visiting. Do come again.

Best wishes,

Ayesha