Every now and then I reach out to you
Wanting to feel your loving hand;
To some, I appear a fool, perhaps,
But I neither live nor die without you.
The smiling eyes, the touching words,
Have all stayed within my soul;
If today, you seem like snow, my love,
Turn to life-giving water, once more.
The beauty of my life has been
In loving you and celebrating love;
Hold my hand, once more, my love,
For that is all I want; my cosmos is in you.
18 comments:
romantic, romantic and more romantic. 9.5 / 10 ayesha, i loved the lines, the formation and the content. :)
Hey Shravan,
Thanks a lot :) Yes, the poem came straight from my heart. When you love a person to that extent, that person becomes the reason for you to stay alive.
Getting or not getting someone at the social level is luck. The essence of love is in loving and only loving.
God bless... :)
I loved your to Shravan,its so true,Getting or not getting someone at the social level is luck. The essence of love is in loving and only loving. Thanks for the lovely message Ayesha, made me clear certain doubts in life:)
Dear Sana,
It is an honour for me if my work helps, motivates people. I am glad the words of this poem have helped clear your doubts.
Take care,
Ayesha
Wow! Lovely...thanks for making us to join in your celebration :-)
Also loved your explanation to shravan. Shree Krishna likes people who celebrate life, joyfully.
Cheers!
Hi Manivannan,
Thank you so much for your appreciative comment mentioning Shree Krishna.
You are right, He loves happiness. He is 'sat chit aanand' and because He has given us qualities from Himself, as individual jeev-souls, we are also 'sat chit aanand' deep within us.
May happiness walk with you :)
Woew this is so straight from the heart and very romantic. Beautifully expressed Ayesha!!
Hi Swetha,
Thanks for your appreciative comment. Best wishes :)
Dear Ayesha,
A person can be so romantic only when he/she surrendres to love.
And I can see you are soaked with love:) Thanks for sharing such a lovely thought. You are all heart:)
Hey Ajay,
Thanks a lot. Well...I suppose I am soaked in love :) Can't help it, buddy.
Have a happy day :)
Ayesha
when human emotions and feeling take word-form not always everything is complete and full message conveyd!
however, Ayesha your breezy style has poured out your heart's desire in a lovely way .. !!
Hi Deeps,
Thanks you for your apreciative comment. At some points in life, words might fail, as you have correctly stated.
Some words, however, leave a lasting impression.
:)
Ayesha
Terrific one.Thumbs up to this post.YOu love someone so passionately.Best of luck
Do visit my blog
Salil
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Hi Salil,
Thank you so much for the appreciative comment and the good wishes.
I will surely visit your blog again.
Have a nice day :)
lovely lines they are..
Thank you, Pink Orchid. Do visit again :)
Those verses were touching.. i could feel the meaning of every word and live every bit of emotion in it..
Hi Sindhu,
Thank you very much for visiting, for your appreciative comment and for following the blog. Do visit again.
Have a happy time :)
Ayesha
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